Chapter 2 Late Night Revisions

Chapter 2 – Late Night Revisions

The mansion was quiet when Debbie returned the next morning, the chaos of the previous night still lingering like a charged current in the air. She had spent most of the day replaying Greg Hartman's words, his smirk, the way his gaze lingered a little too long. Her professional instincts screamed caution. Her body... didn't listen so easily.

Greg was already at his desk when she arrived, fingers tapping rapidly on his laptop. He looked up only briefly, offering a small, playful smirk before returning to his work. "Good morning, Debbie. I hope you're ready for round two. This chapter? Absolute chaos."

Debbie folded her arms, forcing herself to hide the nervous flutter in her chest. "Good morning, Mr. Hartman. Let's see if we can turn chaos into... structure."

He chuckled, leaning back in his chair, long legs stretched under the cluttered desk. "Structure, huh? That's your weapon. Mine's inspiration. We'll see which wins."

They began the revisions, meticulously dissecting paragraphs, debating character motivations, and arguing over pacing. Greg's charm surfaced intermittently - teasing comments, sly smiles, and playful digs at Debbie's rigid precision. And every time, her pulse betrayed her.

By mid-afternoon, they were entrenched in a heated debate over a key chapter.

"You can't just have her make that choice out of nowhere," Debbie said firmly. "It needs emotional buildup. Readers won't believe it."

Greg leaned over her shoulder, eyes dark and intense. "I think they will. Sometimes, the unexpected choice is the one that hits hardest."

Debbie closed her notebook sharply. "Unexpected doesn't mean unearned. There's a difference between suspense and sloppy writing."

His lips quirked into a mischievous smile. "You sound like a strict schoolteacher. I like it."

Debbie felt a flicker of irritation - and something else she wasn't ready to admit. "I'm not here to entertain you, Mr. Hartman. I'm here to save your reputation."

"Hmm," he murmured, leaning back. "Reputation is overrated. But I suppose... you might be right. Maybe a little guidance wouldn't hurt."

As the sun dipped below the horizon, the room grew dim. The sprawling study, filled with books and manuscripts, became a cocoon of tension and anticipation. Greg suggested they continue into the night - deadlines were looming, and he insisted inspiration struck best under pressure. Debbie reluctantly agreed.

Hours passed. The arguments softened into playful banter, laughter mingling with the scratch of pen on paper and the click of keyboard keys. Slowly, the walls they had built between professionalism and attraction began to crumble.

At one point, Debbie reached for a misplaced manuscript page at the same time as Greg. Their fingers brushed, sending an electric jolt through her arm. She glanced up at him, heart hammering, only to find him watching her with a mixture of curiosity and something softer - vulnerability? Maybe even longing.

"I didn't mean..." she began, but he waved it off.

"Accidents happen," he said smoothly. But the corner of his mouth lifted in that signature smirk, the one that made it impossible to stay angry or detached.

As the clock ticked past midnight, they were still editing, fueled by coffee, adrenaline, and something unspoken. Debbie realized she hadn't eaten or moved in hours. Her body was exhausted, her mind alert, and her heart... dangerously aware of Greg's presence.

"You're really something, you know that?" he said quietly, not looking up from his laptop. "Professional, precise, perfect... and utterly frustrating."

Debbie raised an eyebrow. "Flattery won't save you from rewriting this chapter."

He laughed softly, a low sound that sent shivers down her spine. "No, I don't suppose it will. But maybe... it'll earn me a little forgiveness later."

Debbie's pulse quickened. She hated that his words affected her, hated that his presence did, hated that she found herself wanting to lean into the tension rather than resist it. And yet, she also hated how safe it felt to be near him, how easy it was to forget everything else for these fleeting hours.

A sudden knock at the door startled both of them. Debbie jumped, papers fluttering to the floor. Greg's eyes narrowed, instantly alert, and he stood, moving toward the door with an ease that suggested he expected intrusions - or maybe just chaos.

Debbie quickly gathered the scattered papers, trying to calm her racing heart. The knock came again, more insistent.

Greg opened the door to reveal a courier holding a large envelope. He glanced at Debbie, raising one brow. "Probably a manuscript from another client... or a bill I forgot about. Chaos finds me, even when I try to hide."

The courier handed the envelope over, but as Greg took it, Debbie noticed a handwritten note on top, in bold, almost aggressive script:

"Do not let them get away with rewriting the ending."

Greg frowned, flipping the note over. His eyes darkened in a way that made Debbie's stomach twist. He handed the envelope to her. "I don't recognize this handwriting."

Debbie's hands trembled slightly as she opened the envelope. Inside were several pages - not part of Greg's manuscript - but a rough outline of an article that seemed... threatening. Someone had been watching, and someone clearly wanted to interfere with their work.

"This... this isn't from the publisher," Debbie said, her voice barely above a whisper.

Greg's jaw tightened. "No. And whoever sent this clearly knows enough about me to try and intimidate me. Or..." His eyes flicked to hers, "to get to us."

The atmosphere shifted instantly. What had started as playful tension and late-night collaboration now carried a pulse of danger. Their professional stakes were real, but suddenly, so were the risks - external threats that could ruin Greg's career, and potentially put Debbie in the middle of chaos she couldn't control.

Debbie's chest tightened. "We need to be careful. Whoever this is... they're not just trying to scare you. They know our schedule, our edits..."

Greg nodded, his expression hardening. "Looks like this is more than just a book rewrite. Looks like someone wants to write our ending for us."

For the first time that night, Debbie noticed something vulnerable in Greg - a flicker of fear behind the confident smirk. And she realized with an uneasy jolt that the stakes weren't just professional anymore. They were dangerously personal.

Her hand brushed against his as she handed him the pages. The contact was brief, but electric. Both of them hesitated, aware that the tension between them was now layered: attraction, exhaustion, and now, fear.

Greg leaned back in his chair, studying the pages with a frown. "We'll deal with this. Together. But..." He looked at her, and for the first time, the playful smirk was gone. "This is going to get messy."

Debbie's stomach churned, and she couldn't tell if it was from the adrenaline, the attraction, or the thrill of stepping into the unknown alongside him.

Hours later, she finally rose from the chair, exhausted but unable to tear herself away from the tension in the room. Greg didn't offer her a seat. He simply said, "Get some rest. Tomorrow, we finish what we started. And we're going to do it carefully... because someone is watching every move."

Debbie paused at the door, heart hammering, and glanced at him. "Carefully doesn't sound like your style."

He smiled, that dangerous, charming smile. "Carefully isn't mine. But necessary, apparently. For now."

She stepped out, closing the door behind her, but the image of his intense gaze, the brush of their hands, and the ominous note lingered in her mind.

As she walked down the empty hallway, the mansion seemed suddenly alive with shadows, the silence heavy with unspoken words and unseen threats. She realized that with Greg Hartman, nothing was ever simple - not the manuscript, not the late-night sessions, and certainly not the storm of attraction that was beginning to consume them both.

As Debbie turned the corner, a shadow moved past a window in the study. She froze, heart racing. Whoever had sent the note was closer than she thought - and watching their every move.