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Perfect! This week: Chapter 1:*The Crimson Scholarship* * ** - In which we finally dive into your 5,000-word horror-fantasy novella, *Saiha Jony Adrah Jeachon, Bachelor of Business Administration*. This chapter mixes **mystery, supernatural tension, and academic intrigue, setting the stage for the bizarre world Saiha will soon find herself in.
LOVE AND IRONY (CHAPTER 1: THE CRIMSON SCHOLARSHIP)
Saiha Jony never had to apply for the Crimson Scholarship.
He was certain of that - as certain as he was about the color of his eyes, or the precise number of cracks in the ceiling of his bedroom, which he'd counted a thousand times in the insomnia of the night.
And yet, there it was.
An envelope - thick, red-waxed, old-fashioned - waiting neatly on the desk in his dormitory when he returned from a late economics class.
No postage. No signature. His full name hand written in black ink is stated only:
SAIHA JONY ADRAH JEACHON
B.B.A. (Bachelor of Business Administration)
Midnight Grove University - South Building, Room 9C
The paper smelled like roses and smoke, and when it got wet, it turned the liquid red.
"There's no way this is real," Saiha scoffed, ripping it open. Inside was a single page. Velvet-textured. Blood-red lettering.
"To the Heir of Memory To Be -
You are authorized to attend the Mirror Studies Program as part of your Crimson Scholarship. Attendance is not optional. It is here by obligatory to report after midnight. Veiled to sign, sealed by fire, marked by ash. *
There was no date.
No name of a faculty advisor.
No definition of exactly what a "Mirror Studies Program" was.
But... the paper shimmered slightly within his fingers, as though it were a living thing.
Saiha's fingers trembled.
Midnight Grove had never felt right to him - too many dark corners, too many professors who simply never got old. The university crest - a cracked mirror encircled by a crown of thorns - was even, to me, a kind of warning rather than an emblem.
But this?
This was something different.
He sat on his bed later that night, spread of scholarship tucked
Of course - here's another exchange-driven scene that can fall right after Chapter 1: The Crimson Scholarship, further complicating the mystery and chemistry between Saiha and Adrah. This occurs in the dark catacombs of the college: in the forbidden Mirror Archives.
🕯️ Scene: The Mirror Archives – 1:03 a.m.
[Setting:]
Books made of glass. Shelves that whisper. The walls glimmer, as if barely real. Saiha and Adrah walk together side-by-side through the darkness with Adrah carrying a lantern. Every pace rings out like footsteps through water.
SAIHA:
(voice hushed)
"This place didn't exist on any map.
ADRAH:
"The reason is, it's not meant to exist. Not to most."
SAIHA:
(glaring)
"And I'm just supposed to trust that you're whumping me into a ghost library for shits and giggles?"
ADRAH:
(grins faintly)
"If I were dragging you in for fun, there'd be snacks."
SAIHA:
(rolls eyes)
"Hilarious. So who are you really, Adrah? Because there is no transfer student out there who smells like rain and speaks in riddles."
ADRAH:
(stopping, serious now)
"I'm someone who's seen you die. Over and over. For lifetimes. This time, I'm trying to shut it down."
SAIHA:
(blinks, caught off guard)
"...What?"
ADRAH:
(softly)
"I don't expect you to have known. Not yet. But this curse, this 'scholarship' - it always begins here. With a letter. With the archives. With us."
SAIHA:
(swallowing)
"Why me?"
ADRAH:
(looking at him)
"Because you were the first one to remember. The only one who ever decided to return."
SAIHA:
(murmuring)
"Even if it killed me?"
ADRAH:
(firmly)
"Especially then."
*[At the end of the hall, they come across a large cracked mirror. And here their reflections blur and shimmer - showing not just them, but *versions of them: dressed in armor, in robes, in school uniforms from centuries ago, bloodied, crowned, tumbling. **
SAIHA:
(breathing shakily)
"What the hell is that?"
ADRAH:
(quietly)
"That's your memory, Saiha.
And your,Absolutely - here's a little ^dialogue-driven scene, the *eighteenth, wherein tension mounts and Saiha begins to address some of the secrets that have been looming over him. This time, he traps one of the professors associated with the enigmatic "Mirror Studies Program."
📚 Scene: Professor Elian's Office - Evening Showers
[Setting:]
A dim, claustrophobic office with antique scrolls and artifacts in neat piles. The rain falls against the stained-glass windows. Facing off from Saiha is Professor Elian, a disconcertingly young-looking man with ink-stained fingers and eyes that don't blink nearly often enough.
SAIHA:
(slamming the scholarship letter on the table)
"I want answers. Now."
PROF. ELIAN:
(raising a brow)
"And I thought business students didn't like magic.
SAIHA:
"I didn't sign up for magic. Or curses. Or time-bending death loops. And not, certainly, for enigmatic professors who feign I'm hallucinating."
PROF. ELIAN:
(sighs)
"Mr. Jeachon, are you aware that you are Mr. Jeachon?"
SAIHA:
(quietly)
"I think I'm starting to."
PROF. ELIAN:
(leaving his chair)
"The Crimson Scholarship does not select candidates. It calls them back. You answered."
SAIHA:
"I never applied."
PROF. ELIAN:
(softly)
"Didn't you? Not in this life, perhaps. But memory stains the soul. And yours is drenched in unfinished stories."
SAIHA:
(stepping forward)
"Who is Adrah?"
* [The professor hesitates - only for a beat - but it's too much.] *
PROF. ELIAN:
"Your undoing. Or your salvation. "Depending on which version of you wins."
SAIHA:
(voice shaking)
"I don't want versions. I want the truth."
PROF. ELIAN:
(stern now)
"Then you have to get through the Mirror Gate. It means trusting the boy who, you were always intended to forget."
[Narration:]
And in that office, by candlelight that flickered in the drafts and from the old books,
Saiha was one thing clear about it:
This was not just about him.
It never had been.
Do you want to follow with a mirror gate initiation sequence next, or mod edit in language for a conversation?Here's your nineteenth dialogue-propelled stage, where we get a glimpse of the emotion at the heart of Saiha and Adrah's friendship. This scene is after Saiha confronts Professor Elian. He goes back to the roof where he met Adrah the first time, demanding honesty - though inside secretly hoping for something more than just truth: connection.
🌫️ Scene: The North Tower Rooftop � Midnight Mist
[Setting:]
The wind is cold. An eerie mist curls around the railings. Saiha, near the rim, wears a partly zipped jacket. Adrah is waiting there, as if he has been expectning Saiha.
SAIHA:
(stiffly)
"You knew I'd go to Elian, didn't you?
ADRAH:
(softly)
"I was hoping you would. The truth means a lot more when you ask for it."
SAIHA:
(steps closer)
"Then here I am. Asking. What am I? What are you?"
ADRAH:
(turns, his eyes shining faintly through the mist)
"I'm what remains of a promise made 100 years ago ... to a save a world, you broke."
SAIHA:
(scoffs)
"Romantic. Convenient."
ADRAH:
(pained)
"Do you want the dramatic one, or the true one?"
SAIHA:
"Both."
*[Beat. The wind howls. Adrah walks in on her.] *
ADRAH:
"I'm the boy who waited five lives for you to remember me.
You're the one who gets himself killed just so I don't get hurt.
And this go-round, if we don't snap the cycle, we both vanish. For good."
SAIHA:
(voice shaking)
"I mean none of that looms very big in my mind."
ADRAH:
(closer now)
"You don't have to. Your soul already does. That's why you're angry. Why you're scared. Why you're still here."
SAIHA:
(quiet)
"What if I am not the way who I was?"
ADRAH:
(gently)
"Then I'll just have to fall in love with you as you are now."
[Narration:]
In the cold, above the mist,
Something primordial flared up between them once more -
Not magic. Not memory.
But choice.
And it was a greater peril than any curse.
Would you like,Here's your 20th dialogue-rich scene as Saiha's memories start to crack open in the course of a supernatural test. The setting is hallucinatory, the stakes are personal, and the emotional tension between Saiha and Adrah is deepening - with memory and desire beginning to slide together.
🩸Erebus: The Mirror Gate Trial - Inbetwixt Realities
[Setting:]
A room of infinite reflections. Saiha is standing in the middle of mirrors - and each one shows a different Saiha. Some wear crowns. Some bleed. One screams his name. In the middle of the commotion is Adrah, stoically tense, waiting.
SAIHA:
(eyes darting around)
"What is this? What am I supposed to do?"
ADRAH:
(softly)
"You're not here to fight. You're here to choose."
SAIHA:
"Choose what?"
ADRAH:
"Which of yourself you'll retain ... and which you'll burn off."
*[One mirror reflects Saiha grinning next to a family he's never met. Another has him dead in the arms of Adrah. Another shows fire.] *
SAIHA:
(voice cracking)
"I don't know which is the real one."
ADRAH:
(stepping closer)
"They all are. They all *were. * "But only one future lives through this."
SAIHA:
(snarling)
"I didn't ask for this."
ADRAH:
"I know. But you chose it. Again and again. Even when it killed you. Even when it killed *me. *"
*[ Saiha rears back from the mirrors, breathing hard.] *
SAIHA:
"Why?! Why do I keep doing this to myself?! "
ADRAH:
(hushed stepping in front of him)
"'Goodbye' simply means we'll miss you, until we meet again."."Because somewhere in every lifetime... we found each other. And it was worth everything."
SAIHA:
(voice low)
"And if I walk away now?"
ADRAH:
(still)
"Then I'll stay behind. Like I always do."
*[Saiha's hand twitches. One of the mirrors is starting to crack - the mirror where they are holding hands, older, smiling]. *
SAIHA:
(whispers)
is a letter by Leon Trotsky, speaking to his son Sergei during the revolution, that ends: 'I don't wish you, I don't allow you to lag behind any more.'
ADRAH:
(reaches out, palm up)
"Then take me with you. Choose *us,Here's your twenty-first dialog-heavy scene, based on a strong romantic pivot between Saiha and Adrah. Once they survive the Mirror Gate, the emotions are real, and for the first time, neither one is retreating from what they feel. It is a quiet, yes, but it changes everything.
🌌 Scene: The Courtyard of Forgotten Stars – After the Trial Has Calm
[Setting:]
Night has fallen. Cracked stone statues glower in a garden beneath by starlight that hangs unnaturally low. Saiha and Adrah are on a moss-strewn bench, sitting next to each other, both silent for a while after the Glass Gate smashed.
SAIHA:
(softly)
"It's weird ... I should feel broken. But I don't."
ADRAH:
(turning to him)
"Because you're no longer fighting yourself."
SAIHA:
(smiling faintly)
"Or maybe I just got tired of pretending like I don't care."
ADRAH:
(quiet, hopeful)
"Pretending about what?"
SAIHA:
(looks at him)
"You. All of it. How my heart aches when I'm close to you. The way I wanted to forget... because remembering hurts.'
ADRAH:
(tender)
"I never wished to be your pain, Saiha.
SAIHA:
"You weren't. You were my beginning."
*[A moment of stillness. The stars appear to breathe with them.] *
ADRAH:
(voice trembling)
"I kept waiting. Lifetime after lifetime. I didn't know if you would pick me again."
SAIHA:
(reaches for his hand)
"I did not call you again, Adrah.
I never stopped."
*[Adrah exhales shakily. Their fingers entwine.] *
ADRAH:
"Say it."
SAIHA:
(leans closer, steady)
"I love you. Through time, through death, through every me. I love you."
*[Adrah's eyes sparkle - and not with magic but something older, something more true. He leans in. Their foreheads touch.] *
ADRAH:
"Then let this be the life where we actually get to *live. *"
[Narration:]
There isn't ink on all love.
A few are etched in starlight –
And bound with the truth that time nor fate seemed to be able to,Here's your 20th dialogue-rich scene as Saiha's memories start to crack open in the course of a supernatural test. The setting is hallucinatory, the stakes are personal, and the emotional tension between Saiha and Adrah is deepening - with memory and desire beginning to slide together.
🩸Erebus: The Mirror Gate Trial - Inbetwixt Realities
[Setting:]
A room of infinite reflections. Saiha is standing in the middle of mirrors - and each one shows a different Saiha. Some wear crowns. Some bleed. One screams his name. In the middle of the commotion is Adrah, stoically tense, waiting.
SAIHA:
(eyes darting around)
"What is this? What am I supposed to do?"
ADRAH:
(softly)
"You're not here to fight. You're here to choose."
SAIHA:
"Choose what?"
ADRAH:
"Which of yourself you'll retain ... and which you'll burn off."
*[One mirror reflects Saiha grinning next to a family he's never met. Another has him dead in the arms of Adrah. Another shows fire.] *
SAIHA:
(voice cracking)
"I don't know which is the real one."
ADRAH:
(stepping closer)
"They all are. They all *were. * "But only one future lives through this."
SAIHA:
(snarling)
"I didn't ask for this."
ADRAH:
"I know. But you chose it. Again and again. Even when it killed you. Even when it killed *me. *"
*[ Saiha rears back from the mirrors, breathing hard.] *
SAIHA:
"Why?! Why do I keep doing this to myself?! "
ADRAH:
(hushed stepping in front of him)
"'Goodbye' simply means we'll miss you, until we meet again."."Because somewhere in every lifetime... we found each other. And it was worth everything."
SAIHA:
(voice low)
"And if I walk away now?"
ADRAH:
(still)
"Then I'll stay behind. Like I always do."
*[Saiha's hand twitches. One of the mirrors is starting to crack - the mirror where they are holding hands, older, smiling]. *
SAIHA:
(whispers)
is a letter by Leon Trotsky, speaking to his son Sergei during the revolution, that ends: 'I don't wish you, I don't allow you to lag behind any more.'
ADRAH:
(reaches out, palm up)
"Then take me with you. Choose *us,Here's your twenty-first dialog-heavy scene, based on a strong romantic pivot between Saiha and Adrah. Once they survive the Mirror Gate, the emotions are real, and for the first time, neither one is retreating from what they feel. It is a quiet, yes, but it changes everything.
🌌 Scene: The Courtyard of Forgotten Stars – After the Trial Has Calm
[Setting:]
Night has fallen. Cracked stone statues glower in a garden beneath by starlight that hangs unnaturally low. Saiha and Adrah are on a moss-strewn bench, sitting next to each other, both silent for a while after the Glass Gate smashed.
SAIHA:
(softly)
"It's weird ... I should feel broken. But I don't."
ADRAH:
(turning to him)
"Because you're no longer fighting yourself."
SAIHA:
(smiling faintly)
"Or maybe I just got tired of pretending like I don't care."
ADRAH:
(quiet, hopeful)
"Pretending about what?"
SAIHA:
(looks at him)
"You. All of it. How my heart aches when I'm close to you. The way I wanted to forget... because remembering hurts.'
ADRAH:
(tender)
"I never wished to be your pain, Saiha.
SAIHA:
"You weren't. You were my beginning."
*[A moment of stillness. The stars appear to breathe with them.] *
ADRAH:
(voice trembling)
"I kept waiting. Lifetime after lifetime. I didn't know if you would pick me again."
SAIHA:
(reaches for his hand)
"I did not call you again, Adrah.
I never stopped."
*[Adrah exhales shakily. Their fingers entwine.] *
ADRAH:
"Say it."
SAIHA:
(leans closer, steady)
"I love you. Through time, through death, through every me. I love you."
*[Adrah's eyes sparkle - and not with magic but something older, something more true. He leans in. Their foreheads touch.] *
ADRAH:
"Then let this be the life where we actually get to *live. *"
[Narration:]
There isn't ink on all love.
A few are etched in starlight –
And bound with the truth that time nor fate seemed to be able to,Here's your twenty-first dialog-heavy scene, based on a strong romantic pivot between Saiha and Adrah. Once they survive the Mirror Gate, the emotions are real, and for the first time, neither one is retreating from what they feel. It is a quiet, yes, but it changes everything.
🌌 Scene: The Courtyard of Forgotten Stars – After the Trial Has Calm
[Setting:]
Night has fallen. Cracked stone statues glower in a garden beneath by starlight that hangs unnaturally low. Saiha and Adrah are on a moss-strewn bench, sitting next to each other, both silent for a while after the Glass Gate smashed.
SAIHA:
(softly)
"It's weird ... I should feel broken. But I don't."
ADRAH:
(turning to him)
"Because you're no longer fighting yourself."
SAIHA:
(smiling faintly)
"Or maybe I just got tired of pretending like I don't care."
ADRAH:
(quiet, hopeful)
"Pretending about what?"
SAIHA:
(looks at him)
"You. All of it. How my heart aches when I'm close to you. The way I wanted to forget... because remembering hurts.'
ADRAH:
(tender)
"I never wished to be your pain, Saiha.
SAIHA:
"You weren't. You were my beginning."
*[A moment of stillness. The stars appear to breathe with them.] *
ADRAH:
(voice trembling)
"I kept waiting. Lifetime after lifetime. I didn't know if you would pick me again."
SAIHA:
(reaches for his hand)
"I did not call you again, Adrah.
I never stopped."
*[Adrah exhales shakily. Their fingers entwine.] *
ADRAH:
"Say it."
SAIHA:
(leans closer, steady)
"I love you. Through time, through death, through every me. I love you."
*[Adrah's eyes sparkle - and not with magic but something older, something more true. He leans in. Their foreheads touch.] *
ADRAH:
"Then let this be the life where we actually get to *live. *"
[Narration:]
There isn't ink on all love.
A few are etched in starlight –
Here's your 20th dialogue-rich scene as Saiha's memories start to crack open in the course of a supernatural test. The setting is hallucinatory, the stakes are personal, and the emotional tension between Saiha and Adrah is deepening - with memory and desire beginning to slide together.
🩸Erebus: The Mirror Gate Trial - Inbetwixt Realities
[Setting:]
A room of infinite reflections. Saiha is standing in the middle of mirrors - and each one shows a different Saiha. Some wear crowns. Some bleed. One screams his name. In the middle of the commotion is Adrah, stoically tense, waiting.
SAIHA:
(eyes darting around)
"What is this? What am I supposed to do?"
ADRAH:
(softly)
"You're not here to fight. You're here to choose."
SAIHA:
"Choose what?"
ADRAH:
"Which of yourself you'll retain ... and which you'll burn off."
*[One mirror reflects Saiha grinning next to a family he's never met. Another has him dead in the arms of Adrah. Another shows fire.] *
SAIHA:
(voice cracking)
"I don't know which is the real one."
ADRAH:
(stepping closer)
"They all are. They all *were. * "But only one future lives through this."
SAIHA:
(snarling)
"I didn't ask for this."
ADRAH:
"I know. But you chose it. Again and again. Even when it killed you. Even when it killed *me. *"
*[ Saiha rears back from the mirrors, breathing hard.] *
SAIHA:
"Why?! Why do I keep doing this to myself?! "
ADRAH:
(hushed stepping in front of him)
"'Goodbye' simply means we'll miss you, until we meet again."."Because somewhere in every lifetime... we found each other. And it was worth everything."
SAIHA:
(voice low)
"And if I walk away now?"
ADRAH:
(still)
"Then I'll stay behind. Like I always do."
*[Saiha's hand twitches. One of the mirrors is starting to crack - the mirror where they are holding hands, older, smiling]. *
SAIHA:
(whispers)
is a letter by Leon Trotsky, speaking to his son Sergei during the revolution, that ends: 'I don't wish you, I don't allow you to lag behind any more.'
ADRAH:
(reaches out, palm up)
"Then take me with you. Choose *us,Here's your twenty-first dialog-heavy scene, based on a strong romantic pivot between Saiha and Adrah. Once they survive the Mirror Gate, the emotions are real, and for the first time, neither one is retreating from what they feel. It is a quiet, yes, but it changes everything.
🌌 Scene: The Courtyard of Forgotten Stars – After the Trial Has Calm
[Setting:]
Night has fallen. Cracked stone statues glower in a garden beneath by starlight that hangs unnaturally low. Saiha and Adrah are on a moss-strewn bench, sitting next to each other, both silent for a while after the Glass Gate smashed.
SAIHA:
(softly)
"It's weird ... I should feel broken. But I don't."
ADRAH:
(turning to him)
"Because you're no longer fighting yourself."
SAIHA:
(smiling faintly)
"Or maybe I just got tired of pretending like I don't care."
ADRAH:
(quiet, hopeful)
"Pretending about what?"
SAIHA:
(looks at him)
"You. All of it. How my heart aches when I'm close to you. The way I wanted to forget... because remembering hurts.'
ADRAH:
(tender)
"I never wished to be your pain, Saiha.
SAIHA:
"You weren't. You were my beginning."
*[A moment of stillness. The stars appear to breathe with them.] *
ADRAH:
(voice trembling)
"I kept waiting. Lifetime after lifetime. I didn't know if you would pick me again."
SAIHA:
(reaches for his hand)
"I did not call you again, Adrah.
I never stopped."
*[Adrah exhales shakily. Their fingers entwine.] *
ADRAH:
"Say it."
SAIHA:
(leans closer, steady)
"I love you. Through time, through death, through every me. I love you."
*[Adrah's eyes sparkle - and not with magic but something older, something more true. He leans in. Their foreheads touch.] *
ADRAH:
"Then let this be the life where we actually get to *live. *"
[Narration:]
There isn't ink on all love.
A few are etched in starlight –
And bound with the truth that time nor fate seemed to be able to,Here's your 20th dialogue-rich scene as Saiha's memories start to crack open in the course of a supernatural test. The setting is hallucinatory, the stakes are personal, and the emotional tension between Saiha and Adrah is deepening - with memory and desire beginning to slide together.
🩸Erebus: The Mirror Gate Trial - Inbetwixt Realities
[Setting:]
A room of infinite reflections. Saiha is standing in the middle of mirrors - and each one shows a different Saiha. Some wear crowns. Some bleed. One screams his name. In the middle of the commotion is Adrah, stoically tense, waiting.
SAIHA:
(eyes darting around)
"What is this? What am I supposed to do?"
ADRAH:
(softly)
"You're not here to fight. You're here to choose."
SAIHA:
"Choose what?"
ADRAH:
"Which of yourself you'll retain ... and which you'll burn off."
*[One mirror reflects Saiha grinning next to a family he's never met. Another has him dead in the arms of Adrah. Another shows fire.] *
SAIHA:
(voice cracking)
"I don't know which is the real one."
ADRAH:
(stepping closer)
"They all are. They all *were. * "But only one future lives through this."
SAIHA:
(snarling)
"I didn't ask for this."
ADRAH:
"I know. But you chose it. Again and again. Even when it killed you. Even when it killed *me. *"
*[ Saiha rears back from the mirrors, breathing hard.] *
SAIHA:
"Why?! Why do I keep doing this to myself?! "
ADRAH:
(hushed stepping in front of him)
"'Goodbye' simply means we'll miss you, until we meet again."."Because somewhere in every lifetime... we found each other. And it was worth everything."
SAIHA:
(voice low)
"And if I walk away now?"
ADRAH:
(still)
"Then I'll stay behind. Like I always do."
*[Saiha's hand twitches. One of the mirrors is starting to crack - the mirror where they are holding hands, older, smiling]. *
SAIHA:
(whispers)
is a letter by Leon Trotsky, speaking to his son Sergei during the revolution, that ends: 'I don't wish you, I don't allow you to lag behind any more.'
ADRAH:
(reaches out, palm up)
"Then take me with you. Choose *us,Here's your twenty-first dialog-heavy scene, based on a strong romantic pivot between Saiha and Adrah. Once they survive the Mirror Gate, the emotions are real, and for the first time, neither one is retreating from what they feel. It is a quiet, yes, but it changes everything.
🌌 Scene: The Courtyard of Forgotten Stars – After the Trial Has Calm
[Setting:]
Night has fallen. Cracked stone statues glower in a garden beneath by starlight that hangs unnaturally low. Saiha and Adrah are on a moss-strewn bench, sitting next to each other, both silent for a while after the Glass Gate smashed.
SAIHA:
(softly)
"It's weird ... I should feel broken. But I don't."
ADRAH:
(turning to him)
"Because you're no longer fighting yourself."
SAIHA:
(smiling faintly)
"Or maybe I just got tired of pretending like I don't care."
ADRAH:
(quiet, hopeful)
"Pretending about what?"
SAIHA:
(looks at him)
"You. All of it. How my heart aches when I'm close to you. The way I wanted to forget... because remembering hurts.'
ADRAH:
(tender)
"I never wished to be your pain, Saiha.
SAIHA:
"You weren't. You were my beginning."
*[A moment of stillness. The stars appear to breathe with them.] *
ADRAH:
(voice trembling)
"I kept waiting. Lifetime after lifetime. I didn't know if you would pick me again."
SAIHA:
(reaches for his hand)
"I did not call you again, Adrah.
I never stopped."
*[Adrah exhales shakily. Their fingers entwine.] *
ADRAH:
"Say it."
SAIHA:
(leans closer, steady)
"I love you. Through time, through death, through every me. I love you."
*[Adrah's eyes sparkle - and not with magic but something older, something more true. He leans in. Their foreheads touch.] *
ADRAH:
"Then let this be the life where we actually get to *live. *"
[Narration:]
There isn't ink on all love.
A few are etched in starlight –
And bound with the truth that time nor fate seemed to be able to,Here's your 20th dialogue-rich scene as Saiha's memories start to crack open in the course of a supernatural test. The setting is hallucinatory, the stakes are personal, and the emotional tension between Saiha and Adrah is deepening - with memory and desire beginning to slide together.
🩸Erebus: The Mirror Gate Trial - Inbetwixt Realities
[Setting:]
A room of infinite reflections. Saiha is standing in the middle of mirrors - and each one shows a different Saiha. Some wear crowns. Some bleed. One screams his name. In the middle of the commotion is Adrah, stoically tense, waiting.
SAIHA:
(eyes darting around)
"What is this? What am I supposed to do?"
ADRAH:
(softly)
"You're not here to fight. You're here to choose."
SAIHA:
"Choose what?"
ADRAH:
"Which of yourself you'll retain ... and which you'll burn off."
*[One mirror reflects Saiha grinning next to a family he's never met. Another has him dead in the arms of Adrah. Another shows fire.] *
SAIHA:
(voice cracking)
"I don't know which is the real one."
ADRAH:
(stepping closer)
"They all are. They all *were. * "But only one future lives through this."
SAIHA:
(snarling)
"I didn't ask for this."
ADRAH:
"I know. But you chose it. Again and again. Even when it killed you. Even when it killed *me. *"
*[ Saiha rears back from the mirrors, breathing hard.] *
SAIHA:
"Why?! Why do I keep doing this to myself?! "
ADRAH:
(hushed stepping in front of him)
"'Goodbye' simply means we'll miss you, until we meet again."."Because somewhere in every lifetime... we found each other. And it was worth everything."
SAIHA:
(voice low)
"And if I walk away now?"
ADRAH:
(still)
"Then I'll stay behind. Like I always do."
*[Saiha's hand twitches. One of the mirrors is starting to crack - the mirror where they are holding hands, older, smiling]. *
SAIHA:
(whispers)
is a letter by Leon Trotsky, speaking to his son Sergei during the revolution, that ends: 'I don't wish you, I don't allow you to lag behind any more.'
ADRAH:
(reaches out, palm up)
"Then take me with you. Choose *us,Here's your twenty-first dialog-heavy scene, based on a strong romantic pivot between Saiha and Adrah. Once they survive the Mirror Gate, the emotions are real, and for the first time, neither one is retreating from what they feel. It is a quiet, yes, but it changes everything.
🌌 Scene: The Courtyard of Forgotten Stars – After the Trial Has Calm
[Setting:]
Night has fallen. Cracked stone statues glower in a garden beneath by starlight that hangs unnaturally low. Saiha and Adrah are on a moss-strewn bench, sitting next to each other, both silent for a while after the Glass Gate smashed.
SAIHA:
(softly)
"It's weird ... I should feel broken. But I don't."
ADRAH:
(turning to him)
"Because you're no longer fighting yourself."
SAIHA:
(smiling faintly)
"Or maybe I just got tired of pretending like I don't care."
ADRAH:
(quiet, hopeful)
"Pretending about what?"
SAIHA:
(looks at him)
"You. All of it. How my heart aches when I'm close to you. The way I wanted to forget... because remembering hurts.'
ADRAH:
(tender)
"I never wished to be your pain, Saiha.
SAIHA:
"You weren't. You were my beginning."
*[A moment of stillness. The stars appear to breathe with them.] *
ADRAH:
(voice trembling)
"I kept waiting. Lifetime after lifetime. I didn't know if you would pick me again."
SAIHA:
(reaches for his hand)
"I did not call you again, Adrah.
I never stopped."
*[Adrah exhales shakily. Their fingers entwine.] *
ADRAH:
"Say it."
SAIHA:
(leans closer, steady)
"I love you. Through time, through death, through every me. I love you."
*[Adrah's eyes sparkle - and not with magic but something older, something more true. He leans in. Their foreheads touch.] *
ADRAH:
"Then let this be the life where we actually get to *live. *"
[Narration:]
There isn't ink on all love.
A few are etched in starlight –
And bound with the truth that time nor fate seemed to be able to,
And bound with the truth that time nor fate seemed to be able to,