Chapter 2 The Girl Who Never Comments

Purity Osinachi stared at her phone like it held some secret she wasn't ready to uncover.

The screen glowed softly in the dimness of her room, the light reflecting faintly off the cream-colored walls. Outside, the night hummed with distant sounds-cars passing, dogs barking far away, the low murmur of life continuing without her. Inside, everything felt suspended, as though time itself had paused to watch what she would do next.

The notification sat there, quiet but insistent.

"I didn't think anyone would understand it like this. Thank you for seeing me."

Her chest tightened.

Seeing her?

No. Seeing her words, she corrected silently. That distinction mattered. Words were safer than faces. Words didn't ask questions or expect explanations. Words didn't look at you and decide who you were before you could speak.

Still, the phrase lingered.

Thank you for seeing me.

Purity shifted on her bed, pulling her knees up slightly as she reread the message for the third time. The anonymous writing platform had always been a place of quiet for her-a space where she existed without being noticed. She read stories the way some people watched the rain: silently, completely, without interruption.

She had never commented before.

Not once.

She didn't know why tonight was different.

She didn't know the writer's name. She didn't know his age, his face, his voice, or where he lived. For all she knew, he could be halfway across the world. And yet, the words he had written earlier that evening had felt intimate in a way she couldn't explain-like they had brushed against something tender inside her.

Her fingers hovered over the keyboard.

She wanted to respond. Wanted to say something that made her presence real without making herself too visible. But hesitation wrapped around her like a second skin.

Why am I so nervous? she wondered.

It wasn't like this was real life. There were no faces, no classrooms, no curious eyes. Just text on a screen.

And yet, her heart beat faster.

After a long pause, she typed carefully, deleting and rewriting twice before settling on the words.

"I... I just think your words matter. They feel real. Thank you for sharing them."

She stared at the message.

Her thumb trembled above the Send button.

This was the point of no return.

Finally-after a moment that stretched unbearably long-she pressed it.

The message disappeared.

For a heartbeat, nothing happened.

Then the screen refreshed.

"You're welcome. I didn't expect anyone to notice. You're... different."

Purity swallowed.

Different.

The word settled uneasily in her chest.

Different, to her, had always meant standing out in the wrong way. It meant being asked why she was so quiet, why she never joined conversations, why she preferred books to people. Different was a label she had learned to wear carefully, like glass.

But here-here, it felt softer.

Different meant brave.

Different meant willing to speak when silence was safer.

She exhaled slowly, setting the phone down for a moment as if it might burn her skin.

Her room felt unusually quiet now. The ceiling fan hummed softly above her, its rhythm steady and familiar. Her parents were out, her siblings already asleep in their rooms. The house belonged to her for the night.

She picked up her phone again.

A small smile tugged at her lips before she could stop it.

She had always been the girl who never comments.

The one who read everything, absorbed everything, but never left a trace of herself behind. Observing had always felt safer than participating. Watching meant you couldn't be misunderstood.

So why did this feel... right?

Her gaze drifted to her desk across the room. Her school notebook lay open, pages filled with half-written thoughts, margins crowded with tiny handwriting and unfinished sentences. She wrote constantly-during lessons, during breaks, late at night when sleep wouldn't come.

But no one ever saw those words.

For the first time, she imagined tearing out a page and sliding it across a desk in class. Imagine someone reading her thoughts and understanding without laughing or questioning.

The idea made her heart beat faster.

Her phone vibrated again.

"Do you... want to read the next part?"

Purity blinked.

It was such a simple question. And yet, it felt like an invitation-one that crossed an invisible line she hadn't realized existed.

If she said yes, the conversation would continue.

If she said yes, this wouldn't just be a one-time exchange.

She hesitated.

What if she became too attached? What if this sense of being understood faded the moment she expected more?

But curiosity-and something deeper, quieter-pushed her fingers to reply.

"Yes."

And just like that, the story continued.

The next post appeared a few minutes later.

It was longer than the first. Slower. More deliberate.

Purity sat up against her headboard, and the blanket pulled loosely around her shoulders as she began to read.

The anonymous writer described a quiet boy at school-someone who sat at the back of the class, whose name teachers sometimes forgot, whose presence was so subtle it blurred into the background. A boy who carried stories in his head but never spoke them aloud. Who wrote during breaks instead of talking. Who felt like a ghost moving through hallways filled with noise.

Purity's chest tightened with every paragraph.

The feelings were familiar in a way that made her uncomfortable.

The ache of invisibility.

The exhaustion of pretending not to care.

The longing to be understood without having to explain yourself.

She paused halfway through, resting her phone against her chest as if the words had grown too heavy to hold at a distance.

How can someone describe this so perfectly? she wondered.

She finished the post slowly, rereading certain lines twice.

When she reached the end, she didn't hesitate this time.

Her fingers moved before fear could stop them.

"It's like you... know what it feels like to be me."

She stared at the screen, heart pounding.

For a moment, nothing happened.

There is no typing indicator.

No reply.

The silence stretched, and doubt crept in.

Maybe that was too much.

Maybe I crossed the line.

Just as she was about to set the phone aside, the message appeared.

"Maybe I've been invisible too. Maybe I'm looking for someone who notices."

Purity froze.

Her breath caught halfway through an inhale.

Someone who notices.

The words echoed inside her, striking something she had tried hard not to name. For years, she had told herself she didn't need to be noticed-that wanting attention was foolish, that quiet meant strength.

But that wasn't entirely true.

She wanted to be seen.

Not stared at. Not judged.

Seen.

She pressed the phone to her chest and closed her eyes, breathing slowly until the tightness eased.

For the first time in a long while, the world felt smaller. Safer. As though this tiny exchange of words had carved out a space just for her.

They didn't talk much more that night. Just a few soft messages exchanged before sleep claimed her.

Before turning off the light, Purity typed one final reply.

"Then... maybe you found me too."

She pressed Send.

And smiled.

The next morning, Purity woke earlier than usual.

Sunlight filtered through the curtains, casting pale patterns across her wall. For a moment, she lay still, disoriented, her mind hovering between sleep and wakefulness.

Then she remembered.

The messages.

Her heart fluttered.

She reached for her phone immediately, half-expecting the conversation to feel less real in the daylight. But the messages were still there, unchanged.

She reread them as she dressed for school, brushing her hair absently, her thoughts drifting.

At breakfast, her mother talked about errands and schedules. Her siblings argued over cereal. Purity nodded when expected, answered when spoken to-but her mind was elsewhere.

At school, everything looked the same.

The same gates. The same corridors. The same noise.

But she felt different walking through it.

In English class, she sat in her usual seat by the window, a notebook open. Mrs. Daniels spoke about narrative voice-about how writers often revealed more of themselves on the page than they ever could in person.

Purity's pen stilled.

She thought of the anonymous boy.

Is that who he really is? she wondered. Or just who he can be in words?

Her gaze drifted unconsciously across the classroom.

And that was when she noticed him.

He sat two rows behind her, head bent over a notebook, pen moving steadily. He wasn't loud. Wasn't part of the group that joked constantly at the back. He blended in so seamlessly that she wondered how she had missed him all this time.

Something about his posture tugged at her awareness.

The way he paused before writing, as if considering every word.

The way his shoulders tensed when the classroom grew too loud.

Her heart skipped.

No, she told herself quickly. That's ridiculous.

She turned back to her notebook, but concentration refused to return.

That evening, the messages resumed.

They didn't exchange names.

They didn't ask personal questions.

They talked about writing. About silence. About how it felt to be overlooked.

"Do you ever feel like you're watching life through glass?" he asked.

Purity stared at the screen.

"All the time," she replied. "Like everyone else knows how to exist effortlessly."

"Maybe we just feel deeper," he wrote.

She smiled at that.

As night settled once more around her, Purity realized something that both thrilled and terrified her:

She was no longer just reading a story.

She was part of one.

And somewhere else-perhaps closer than she realized-a quiet boy sat alone with his phone, realizing that the girl who had never commented before had just become the most important reader he had ever known.