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novel title:lost flows Genre: YA Contemporary Fantasy / Mystery Length: ~60,000–70,000 words Target Audience: Ages 13+ Series: Book One in a planned series ("The Flow Cycle") --- One-Line Pitch: A teenage girl discovers a mystical dried-up river hiding memories, secrets, and a haunting force called the Bone Current - and must uncover what was lost to save what remains. --- Concept Summary: When 16-year-old Nia Velez, a mixed-race teen artist grieving her brother's mysterious disappearance, returns to her sleepy hometown, she finds the once-lively river completely dried up. But the river hasn't vanished - it's been buried, erased, and turned into a vessel of forgotten memories and broken magic. Drawn by strange symbols, surreal visions, and whispering currents, Nia uncovers an ancient force called the Bone Current, a living memory that feeds on what people forget. As she and a pair of mysterious allies - the quiet, glitching Milo and the blade-carrying knowledge-keeper Leif - investigate the River's silence, they realize something monstrous lies beneath the soil: a secret once willingly buried. To restore the Flow and rescue the people it's devoured, Nia must face her grief, her past, and the terrifying possibility that remembering the truth might drown her, too. --- Narrative Structure: Told in 12 chapters + epilogue, Lost Flows blends eerie mystery with emotional fantasy and slow-unfolding magic. Each chapter escalates both the tension and Nia's emotional unraveling, with river-based symbolism acting as a metaphor for grief, memory, and resilience. --- Key Characters: Nia Velez – A 16-year-old girl who lost her brother and returns to uncover the truth about the river. Emotionally guarded, creative, fiercely loyal. Milo – A mysterious boy tied to the river's forgotten memories. He exists between reality and the Flow, half-lost but deeply connected to Nia. Leif – A teenager who acts as a protector and truth-bearer for the Flow. Stoic, wise beyond his years, carries ancient knowledge and a ceremonial blade. The Bone Current – A faceless, memory-consuming force tied to the river. It doesn't speak for itself - it uses others' memories to lure and deceive. --- Themes: Memory vs. Forgetting – The river represents the flow of memory; when it dries up, people forget what mattered. Grief and Healing – Nia's journey is tied to unresolved loss. The river's healing mirrors her emotional closure. Identity – The tension of being "between" things - races, realities, worlds - is reflected in Nia and Milo. Nature and the Supernatural – Magical realism blends with environmental and spiritual elements. --- Chapter Snapshot: 1. The Vanishing River – Nia returns and finds the river gone; strange symbols appear. 2. Whispers in the Drain – She meets Milo and hears voices in the pipes. 3. The Old Bridge Teeth – She and Leif discover the river ate things - including memories. 4. Vault of the Hollow Echo – They explore a sealed library under the river. 5. The Boy Beneath – Milo reveals he drowned but didn't die. 6. Name That Eats – The Bone Current shows its hunger. 7. The Flow Repeats – Nia realizes she's lived pieces of this before. 8. How to Draw a God – She sketches the Bone Current - and it sketches her back. 9. The Forgotten Mouth – They descend into a chamber made of bone and memory. 10. The River Remembers – Nia faces the Bone Current and uses memory to reclaim the river. 11. The Ripple That Stayed – Milo chooses to stay behind to hold the Current at bay. 12. Frostline Messages – Strange frost symbols begin appearing, teasing Book Two's mystery.

Chapter 1 The vanishing river.

The river was gone.

It wasn't low, or dry from drought. It had disappeared, completely-like someone had scooped it up with a giant ladle and carried it away. The riverbed, once silver and alive, lay bare, its stones exposed like bones under torn skin. Cracked mud snaked across the bottom in long, jagged lines. The air hung heavy with silence, disturbed only by the occasional caw of a blackbird overhead.

Nia Everhart stood in the middle of the old Vale Bridge, her fingers clenched tight around the rusted metal railing. She didn't speak. She didn't move. Her heart beat like thunder in her chest, thudding louder than the silence around her. The dream still clung to her skin-Milo's voice, rising up through murky water, calling her name.

She hadn't wanted to believe it.

She'd woken at 4:17 a.m. sharp, sweat-soaked, heart pounding, a chill running down her spine. In the dream, her brother was reaching for her, his fingers just breaking the surface, eyes wide and terrified beneath the water. She'd rushed to his room only to find his bed empty, sheets tangled and cold.

Now, here she was.

Staring at the place where the river should have been. And there was no sign of Milo.

Behind her, tires crunched over gravel as other townsfolk began to arrive. First Mr. Dorn with his pickup truck. Then the elderly Granger sisters, muttering prayers under their breath. A couple of teenagers from school leaned over the rail, filming videos for their social feeds. It felt wrong-so wrong-to see them laughing, to hear the tinny sound of music from someone's phone echoing against the dead riverbed.

"He probably just went into town early," her mother had said, still groggy when Nia shook her awake. But her mother's eyes had flickered toward Milo's empty bed, and something in her voice had cracked. She hadn't followed Nia. She hadn't said goodbye.

Nia checked her phone. No signal. No messages. No Milo.

She walked off the bridge and down the embankment, the soles of her sneakers crunching over dry twigs and pebbles. The earth beneath her felt hollow, almost false-like she was walking on a stage set built to look like the river she'd grown up with.

Her eyes scanned the banks for any sign: a trail, footprints, his backpack, anything.

And then she saw it.

Milo's bike, propped carelessly against the willow tree. The kickstand was down, the chain still glinting with fresh oil. A half-empty bottle of lemonade lay on the grass beside it, beads of condensation still clinging to the plastic.

She knelt next to the bottle, touched it.

Cold.

He had been here. And not long ago.

Nia's throat tightened. Her voice caught in her chest. She turned slowly, eyes scanning the banks, the brush, the trees. And then-she saw it.

A small handprint in the dry mud. Not pressed into it, not indented-drawn, like a perfect etching. Almost too perfect.

"Milo?" she called, her voice cracking.

No answer. Just the wind rustling through the reeds and the dry creak of a branch above her.

Suddenly, a splash echoed behind her-sharp, quick, impossible.

She whipped around.

Nothing.

The river was still gone.

But the air had changed. Warmer. Heavier. She could smell salt now. Not the usual earthy river scent-but something older, something that didn't belong. Like the sea after a storm.

And then she saw it: a shimmer in the air, a barely-there ripple floating above the riverbed like heat haze. It pulsed, faint and slow, before fading back into nothing.

Nia stepped forward, breath shallow. Her hand moved instinctively to the river pendant she always wore-an old, smoothed blue stone Milo had given her last year. It was warm against her chest. Warmer than it should be.

Her phone buzzed.

She jerked it out of her pocket.

One message.

> "Find the flows before the silence takes him."

No number. No contact. No trace of where it had come from.

And then, as quickly as it had appeared, the message vanished.

Nia stared at the screen, hands trembling.

She looked up once more at the riverbed. At the missing water. At the silence.

She didn't know how or why, but one thing was suddenly, terribly clear.

The river hadn't dried up.

It had been taken.

And so had Milo.

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