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My Dying Wish: A Fiancé's Betrayal

My Dying Wish: A Fiancé's Betrayal

Author: : Baxy Koseluk
Genre: Modern
My family and fiancé begged me to donate my last remaining kidney to my twin sister, Kyleigh. They didn't know I was already dying. My fiancé, Axel, gave me an ultimatum. "Donate the kidney, or I'll break our engagement and marry Kyleigh. It's her dying wish." I agreed, only for them to frame me for plagiarism with my own thesis, forcing me to confess on camera. They never knew I was the one who secretly saved our father with my other kidney five years ago-a sacrifice Kyleigh had stolen all the credit for. As they wheeled me into the operating room, they celebrated with Kyleigh, promising her a future built on my death. I was already a ghost to them. But I died on the table. The surgeon, seeing the old surgical scar and the poison riddling my body, walked out to face them. "This wasn't a donation," she announced, her voice cold as steel. "This was murder."

Chapter 1

My family and fiancé begged me to donate my last remaining kidney to my twin sister, Kyleigh. They didn't know I was already dying.

My fiancé, Axel, gave me an ultimatum.

"Donate the kidney, or I'll break our engagement and marry Kyleigh. It's her dying wish."

I agreed, only for them to frame me for plagiarism with my own thesis, forcing me to confess on camera. They never knew I was the one who secretly saved our father with my other kidney five years ago-a sacrifice Kyleigh had stolen all the credit for.

As they wheeled me into the operating room, they celebrated with Kyleigh, promising her a future built on my death. I was already a ghost to them.

But I died on the table. The surgeon, seeing the old surgical scar and the poison riddling my body, walked out to face them.

"This wasn't a donation," she announced, her voice cold as steel. "This was murder."

Chapter 1

Jana Doyle POV:

The bitter truth was a quiet hum beneath my skin, a melody of inevitability. My life, meticulously crafted by others, was finally reaching its crescendo, not in triumph, but in a silent, tragic fade. It was a strange kind of peace, this surrender.

Axel walked into the sterile waiting room, his usually impeccably composed face now a mask of heavy concern. His eyes, normally sharp and calculating, were clouded with a torment that wasn' t for me. He looked at me, then past me, as if I were a ghost already.

"Jana," he began, his voice rough, "it's Kyleigh."

Of course, it was Kyleigh. It always was. Five years ago, her health issues had first cast a long shadow over our lives. Now, her remaining kidney was failing, a ticking clock that echoed the one inside me.

He didn't waste time with pleasantries. "She needs a kidney. Immediately." The words hung in the air, heavy and absolute, a demand rather than an plea.

My breath hitched. I knew this was coming. I' d seen it in my parents' strained smiles, in Kyleigh' s increasingly desperate pleas for attention. My sister, the fragile one, the golden child, needed saving again. And I was expected to be the savior.

Axel pulled a folded document from his jacket. It was a prenuptial agreement, but with a horrifying twist. "If you refuse, our engagement is off. I'll marry Kyleigh. It's her dying wish, Jana." His voice was low, but the threat was clear, cold steel. He would sacrifice me to fulfill a morbid fantasy, to play the hero to her damsel in distress.

Marry Kyleigh. The thought was a fresh wound, but my existing ones were too deep to let it truly sting. I was already dying. What did a broken engagement matter when my own breath was a borrowed gift?

"Axel," I said, my voice barely a whisper, "you know the risks. She's delicate. Time is critical." I was talking about Kyleigh, but the words felt like a cruel joke, a twisted echo of my own silent countdown.

He leaned closer, his voice laced with a desperate urgency. "This is her last chance, Jana. She won't make it without you. You're strong. You always have been." His words were a balm, a poison, a testament to how little he truly saw.

"Your parents... they agree," he added, his gaze flicking away. "They say it's your duty. For the family." That was a familiar refrain, one that had played on an endless loop for as long as I could remember. My duty. My sacrifice.

His hand reached for mine, a gesture that once meant comfort, now felt like a leash. "Jana, I love you," he whispered, his thumb caressing my knuckles. "I do. Just... just get through this. After Kyleigh is well, after... after this is all over, we'll be together. I promise."

The words tasted like ash. After Kyleigh is well. After I am gone. Did he even hear himself? He was promising a future that had no room for me, built on a foundation of my imminent demise.

I remembered the quiet agony of five years ago, my father' s fading strength, the frantic search for a donor. I remembered the hushed conversations, the desperate prayers. And I remembered stepping forward, anonymously. My body still bore the scar, a silent testament to a sacrifice no one knew I' d made.

I had only one kidney left. My kidney. The other was beating in my father' s chest.

My family, blinded by their adoration for Kyleigh, had always viewed her as Fred' s savior. They had praised her "bravery," her "selflessness," never once questioning the convenient narrative. If I told them the truth now, they would simply dismiss it as malice, as a twisted attempt to steal Kyleigh' s glory. They had done it before.

When I tried, once, years ago, to hint at my own contribution, their dismissal was swift and sharp.

"Jana, don't be ridiculous," my mother, Joyce, had snapped, her eyes wide with feigned offense. "Kyleigh was so brave. You were... well, you were just being difficult, as usual."

My father, Fred, had added, "Don't be ungrateful. Your sister saved my life. You just stood there, so selfish."

The words were a physical blow, a dull ache that resonated in my chest. They painted me as resentful, jealous, unfeeling.

They had thrown me out that day, not with a bang, but a chilling quiet. "Go on then," Joyce had said, waving a dismissive hand. "If you can't be supportive, you can leave."

And Axel, my Axel, had been there. He had found me, a lost, broken thing, and he had promised to be my sanctuary. But even he, in his misguided loyalty, had called me "ungrateful" for challenging Kyleigh's narrative. He saw my pain as a flaw, my voice as a complaint.

Now, here he was, asking me to perform the ultimate sacrifice, again, with my last vital organ. And I was so tired. The illness, this insidious poison stealing my life, had worn me down to a fragile husk. The fight had long since left me.

I looked at Axel, at the desperation in his eyes, at the way his hand trembled slightly on mine, not with love for me, but with fear for Kyleigh. A ghost of a smile touched my lips, a bitter, private acknowledgment. They would never understand. They never had.

"I'll do it," I said, my voice flat, devoid of emotion. "I'll donate."

Axel' s head snapped up, his eyes widening. Relief flooded his face, quickly followed by a triumphant glint. He stared at me, astonished, as if I had just pulled a miracle from thin air. He hadn't expected me to agree, not without a fight. He hadn't known how truly broken I was.

"Jana!" he exclaimed, his voice thick with gratitude. He crushed me in a hug, a desperate, almost painful embrace that was meant for his own relief, not for my comfort. "Thank you. Thank you so much. You're a lifesaver."

He pulled away, his eyes shining, and then, without a word, he snatched up the prenuptial agreement. He tore it in half, then again, the sound a sharp rip in the quiet room. The pieces fluttered to the floor like discarded promises. My fate was sealed. The contract dissolved, but my death sentence remained.

The next few hours were a blur of frantic activity. I was whisked away, a mere commodity, a spare part. My parents arrived, a flurry of agitated whispers and worried glances directed solely at Kyleigh' s room. They didn't even look at me as I was prepped for surgery.

Joyce, my mother, rushed to Kyleigh' s bedside, collapsing into a chair, tears streaming down her face. "My poor baby," she sobbed, clutching Kyleigh' s hand. "You'll be okay. You have to be."

Fred, my father, his face etched with worry, paced the hallway, barking orders at nurses, demanding updates. "She's strong," he kept repeating, as if to convince himself. "She'll pull through. Our family will be whole again."

He returned with the consent forms, his pen already poised. He signed quickly, without a second glance at the details, his focus entirely on the perceived outcome for Kyleigh.

Then, he looked at me, a flicker of something in his eyes-not genuine concern, but a distant, almost perfunctory acknowledgment.

"You're being so mature, Jana," he said, patting my arm, a gesture devoid of warmth. "This is what family does. We look out for each other."

Mature. A word they used when I complied.

"We know we haven't always been... fair," Joyce added, dabbing her eyes. "But Kyleigh needed us more. She was always so fragile. You were always so independent." It was their usual excuse, a thinly veiled justification for decades of neglect.

"Don't worry," Fred interjected, pulling out his wallet. He waved a credit card. "Your share of the family trust is still yours. This doesn't change anything, financially."

"I don't want it," I said, my voice dull. The words felt foreign, even to me. What good was money when I was signing away my life?

Joyce stared at me, her eyes narrowing. "Jana, don't be ungrateful. That's a substantial amount. It' s for your future."

But I had no future. The poison in my blood ensured that. The world seemed to tilt, blurring at the edges. My body was a battlefield, and the war was nearly lost.

My mind drifted, five years back. The hospital corridor, the hushed fear. Fred, lying pale and still, waiting for a kidney. Kyleigh, my twin, suddenly hailed as a hero, her "sacrifice" whispered with awe. Her scar, a thin, perfect line from a cosmetic surgeon, became the emblem of her selflessness. And my scar, deep and ragged, the one that truly saved him, remained unseen, unknown.

From that day, Kyleigh became untouchable. Every whim, every complaint, every fabricated illness amplified. She accused me of mocking Dad' s condition, of being jealous of her "bravery." My parents believed her, their golden child, without question.

"Jana, you're just trying to hurt your sister," Joyce would sigh, whenever I tried to speak.

"Why can't you be more like Kyleigh?" Fred would demand, his voice laced with disappointment.

I stopped fighting. It was easier to disappear, to become the silent shadow they expected me to be.

Now, in the pre-op room, they gathered around Kyleigh's bed, a tableau of love and concern. Joyce stroked Kyleigh's hair, Fred held her hand, Axel sat on the edge of the bed, his gaze fixed on my sister with an intensity that burned. They laughed, hushed and nervous, shared private jokes, whispered words of encouragement.

I stood by the window, a silent sentinel, watching the last rays of sun bleed across the sky. I was on the brink of giving my life, yet I was utterly alone, an invisible presence in my own tragedy.

They don't even see me. The thought was a dull throb, a truth that no longer stung, only resonated with an empty echo. I was a means to an end, a forgotten sacrifice.

Chapter 2

Jana Doyle POV:

My eyes burned, a physical manifestation of the unshed tears, the unspoken pain that had festered for years. I wanted to leave, to escape the suffocating air of their manufactured family drama, where I was always the villain or the invisible prop. I took a step towards the door, a desperate need for fresh air clawing at my throat.

Axel blocked my path, his large frame a sudden, intimidating barrier. His expression was stern, brooking no argument. "Jana, a moment."

He cleared his throat, his gaze shifting uncomfortably towards Kyleigh, who was now "asleep" in her bed, a delicate picture of frailty. "Kyleigh's fellowship application. Her thesis is due soon, and with her condition... she won't be able to finish it." He paused, letting the implication hang. "You have the same major, the same research focus. You could... help her."

A bitter wave washed over me. Help her. The words were a familiar refrain, a veiled command that always led to my own erasure. I knew what he meant. He expected me to write it for her, just as I' d done countless times before.

My mind replayed the endless parade of "help." High school essays, college projects, even her entrance exams to the prestigious architecture program I had yearned for but stepped aside from. Kyleigh, the perpetually "fragile" one, had always needed a ghostwriter, a shadow to ensure her academic success. She' d even cheated on tests, passing off my answers as her own, because she couldn' t bear for my grades to outshine hers. Her cunning had always been sharper than her intellect.

I remembered the time she' d stolen my meticulously crafted portfolio, a collection of designs I' d poured my soul into, and submitted it as her own for a coveted summer internship. She' d gotten it, of course. My name, my work, always her triumph.

Now, it was her fellowship thesis. A crucial stepping stone in her carefully constructed façade. I knew for a fact she hadn't even started it. Why bother, when her diligent twin was always there to pick up the slack?

"Jana, please," my mother, Joyce, whispered from Kyleigh's bedside, her voice dripping with the familiar, manipulative concern. "She's so weak. Just this one last thing before the surgery. For your sister."

Just this one last thing. How many times had I heard those words? Each time, my chest would tighten, a familiar ache blooming behind my ribs. It was a physical manifestation of the slow, agonizing death of my own identity.

I forced a brittle smile, the effort costing me more than it should have. "Of course," I managed, the word a hollow echo. Will she even graduate after I' m gone? The thought was morbid, yet strangely detached. It didn't matter. Soon, none of this would.

Axel' s face lit up, a blinding surge of relief. "Perfect! I knew you'd understand." He reached into his briefcase, pulling out a thick, bound document. "I brought your thesis. Kyleigh's been so inspired by your work, she wanted to use it as a foundation." He handed it to Kyleigh, his gaze adoring.

Kyleigh, who had been lying perfectly still, suddenly stirred. Her eyes fluttered open, dark and knowing. She took the thesis from Axel, a smug smirk twisting her lips. Then, almost imperceptibly, she stuck out her tongue at me, a childish, triumphant gesture that spoke volumes.

Axel leaned down, his lips brushing Kyleigh' s ear. "My clever girl," he murmured, stroking her hair. Kyleigh giggled, a sweet, innocent sound, and playfully swatted his arm, her cheeks flushing. The scene was sickeningly intimate, a betrayal played out before my eyes.

I watched them, a silent observer in my own unraveling life. If the poison hadn' t already leached the fight from me, if the slow decay hadn't dulled my spirit, I would have roared. I would have screamed until the walls shook, until their manufactured peace shattered. But my wolf, my inner strength, had been systematically poisoned, shackled, and silenced for too long.

I turned and walked out of the room, my steps heavy, each one dragging me further into the abyss. Laughter, light and carefree, followed me from the room. No one called out. No one tried to stop me.

I went home, to the quiet solitude of my apartment, my sanctuary from their relentless demands. The cozy living room, once a haven of peace, now felt like a tomb. I stared at my belongings-my architectural sketches, my favorite books, the few trinkets that represented me. A sudden, fierce resolve hardened my heart.

If no one cared, if I was destined to be erased, then I would erase myself. I would leave nothing behind for them to claim, nothing for them to twist into their narrative. I systematically gathered every personal item, every trace of Jana Doyle, and stuffed them into large trash bags. My portfolios, my awards, my cherished memories-all gone. I dragged the bags to the curb, a ritualistic purging of a life unlived.

The exertion sent a searing pain through my chest. My lungs burned, each breath a struggle. The rare degenerative disease, the silent killer that had been gnawing at me for months, was advancing rapidly. The poison was almost at its peak. Every movement was agony now, a cruel reminder of the inevitable.

I stumbled back inside, clutching my chest, gasping for air. I really am dying. The thought wasn't terrifying, just a stark, undeniable fact.

I collapsed onto my bed, the world spinning. I needed to rest, to gather the last vestiges of my strength for the final act. Just a few hours.

A sudden, violent crash shattered the silence. The door to my apartment burst open, slamming against the wall. Axel stood in the doorway, his face contorted with rage. Behind him, my parents appeared, their faces grim, Kyleigh clinging to Joyce, sobbing hysterically.

"What have you done, Jana?" Axel roared, his voice shaking with fury and disbelief. "How could you betray us like this?"

Kyleigh wailed, pointing a trembling finger at me. "She's so cruel! She wants to ruin me!"

"Ruined you?" I murmured, my voice raspy. "How?"

"Don't play innocent!" Axel stepped forward, his eyes blazing. "You deliberately let Kyleigh be accused of plagiarism! You set her up!"

My mother, Joyce, her face etched with disapproval, stepped forward. "Jana, how could you hurt your sister like this? After everything we've done for you!" She wrapped an arm around Kyleigh, pulling her closer, as if to shield her from my supposed malice.

Plagiarism? My thesis. They had done it. They had actually done it.

I closed my eyes, a wave of weariness washing over me. This was it then. The final, brutal act of my life.

Chapter 3

Jana Doyle POV:

Kyleigh had done it. She'd taken my thesis, the one Axel had given her, and posted it to the university's online forum, claiming it as her own. She' d been so brazen, so confident in her ability to manipulate everyone around her.

My former mentor, Professor Albright, a brilliant but notoriously meticulous architect, had been the first to notice. He had always seen something in me, a spark of talent that my family had relentlessly tried to extinguish. He' d supported my projects, praised my unique vision, and even offered me a coveted spot in his advanced research lab. He was the one who had gently suggested that my work was too complex, too original, for Kyleigh's usual style.

When the thesis appeared under Kyleigh's name, he'd been suspicious. He'd started asking her questions, delving into the intricate details of the design, the theoretical frameworks. Kyleigh, predictably, stumbled. She couldn't explain the nuances, couldn't defend the innovative approach, couldn't articulate the very soul of the project.

The online community, ever vigilant, quickly caught on. Comments flooded the forum. "This doesn't sound like Kyleigh's work at all." "She can't even answer basic questions about her own thesis." "It's a clear case of plagiarism!"

Accusations spiraled, a wildfire of digital outrage. The university's integrity was at stake.

Axel, his face a thundercloud, dragged me from my bed. My body screamed in protest, a searing pain shooting through my weakened limbs, but he ignored it. He was blinded by his rage, by his fervent need to protect Kyleigh. He shoved me towards my sister, who was still clinging to Joyce, her sobs echoing dramatically in the small room.

"Look at her, Jana!" he snarled, pointing at Kyleigh. "You ruined everything! Apologize! Now!"

I stared at him, at the fury in his eyes, and a single, agonizing question echoed in my mind: When did he become hers?

I remembered the night he found me, five years ago. My parents had just thrown me out, their words a poisoned dagger in my heart. I was broken, adrift, standing alone in the biting wind. Axel, then a promising young businessman, had been there, a beacon in my darkness. He' d wrapped his jacket around me, his eyes filled with a tenderness I' d never known. He' d taken me home, to his apartment, and listened patiently as I sobbed out my story. He was my rescuer, my anchor. He made me believe in love again, in a future I thought was lost.

He swore he' d protect me, that he' d never let anyone hurt me again. "You' re mine, Jana," he' d whispered, his words a balm to my shattered soul. "I' ll always cherish you." He had hated the way my family treated me, hated their favoritism, their casual cruelty. He was my safe harbor, my everything.

But then Kyleigh had started to invade our space, subtly at first. She' d show up at our dates, "accidentally" bumping into us, always looking frail, always needing Axel' s attention. She' d lean into him, whisper secrets, her delicate hand always finding his arm. Their texts became a constant, a silent stream of communication that excluded me, that chipped away at the foundation of our relationship.

My love, my protector, had slowly, insidiously, become the fierce guardian of my tormentor. I thought I was immune to pain now, that my heart was too numb to break. But watching Axel tear me down to build Kyleigh up, it still twisted a knife in my gut.

What did it matter now? I was a ghost anyway, fading fast. My time was running out. I would give them what they wanted. I would perform this last, pathetic act of self-effacement.

"I did it," I said, my voice barely audible. "I plagiarized the thesis. I'm sorry, Kyleigh." The words tasted like bile.

A collective gasp filled the room. Even Kyleigh stopped sobbing, her eyes wide with surprise. My parents stared at me, then at each other, their faces a mixture of shock and bewildered relief.

"Oh, Jana," Joyce sighed, her hand fluttering to her chest. "You finally care about your sister. It's a shame it took so long."

Fred nodded, a smug look on his face. "See? I told you she'd come around. She just needed a push. Always so mature, deep down."

Axel' s eyes softened, a flicker of something akin to guilt passing through them. He stepped towards me, reaching out. "Jana, I... I know this is hard. But we'll get through it. I'll take care of you. You won't have to worry about anything. Even if you can't finish your studies, we'll ensure you live comfortably."

I forced another smile, a grotesque parody of happiness. Comfortably. He spoke of a future I would never see, a life I would never live. The future he envisioned for "us" was already crumbling into dust.

Kyleigh, who had been watching us with a strange, calculating intensity, suddenly brought out her phone. She turned on the camera, a sly smirk playing on her lips. "I want to record this," she sniffled, her voice still dripping with false tears. "So everyone knows the truth."

She pointed the camera at me. "Jana, you thief! You stole my work! You tried to ruin my life!" she wailed, her performance Oscar-worthy. "Say it! Say you're sorry! Say you plagiarized my thesis!"

My parents and Axel watched, their eyes fixed on me, waiting. Demanding.

I looked into the lens, into the cold, unfeeling eye of the camera. "I... I plagiarized Kyleigh' s thesis," I whispered, my voice breaking. "I apologize. It was wrong. I admit it."

A collective sigh of relief swept through the room. They had their confession. Their golden child was absolved.

Kyleigh, her face still streaked with performative tears, quickly uploaded the video. Within minutes, my phone buzzed with notifications. The online world erupted in a storm of condemnation. "Jana Doyle, the plagiarist! Shame on her!" "How could she do this to her own sister?" Messages of hate, insults, and ridicule flooded my inbox.

Kyleigh, meanwhile, played the gracious victim. She posted a tearful message, "forgiving" me, asking for kindness, portraying herself as the epitome of grace under pressure. While everyone else was distracted, she leaned close to me, her voice a venomous hiss.

"Stupid," she whispered, her eyes alight with triumph. "You never had a chance. You think you can compete with me? You think you deserve their love? They're all mine, Jana. Mom, Dad, Axel. They always were. You don't deserve anyone."

The last words were a hammer blow, cracking what little remained of my spirit. I stared at her, at the pure, unadulterated malice in her eyes, and knew, with a certainty that chilled me to the bone, that she meant every word.

The poison in my veins felt like a welcome embrace. It would be over soon.

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