Aubrey's annotation.
To everyone he was an Adonis ,a dream of every woman and an influential billionaire
While I was just Aubrey ,a chambermaid.
he adjusted his suits and gradually glance down at me leaning against the wall for support. My eyes was swollen from crying and face red.
"am sorry miss Aubrey.... He said and furrowed his blue eyes coldly at me. "it shouldn't has happened ...I have a fiancee and we were under the influence it was a mistake and I want the both of us to forget that this ever happened."
My eyes burrowed to him,my tears fell nonstop. "a mistake you say" I asked bemused and he ran his hands On his messy black hair. He was looking kinda stunned with my comeback.
Concurrently my thoughts is running wild as my tears.
"this is your compensation fee Aubrey it was a night stand though you didn't consented to it i....." he said after what seems like eternity silence and forced a check into my hand.
I widened my eyes in shock. Did he think I was a prostitute or. A gold digger?
"i am no gold digger Mr hunt nor am I a slut." I gritted out the words. reaching for the check I tore it into shreds.
"suits you them miss Aubrey" he said coldly in rage and walked out of room 404 and my life while I broke down.
He left me stranded,on the cold marble floor of room 404 unaware of the thing he left behind ,my beginning of misery.
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Whitepheonix
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Prologue
Aubrey's Annotation
To everyone, he was an Adonis-a dream of every woman and an influential billionaire.
But I was just Aubrey, a chambermaid.
He adjusted his suit and glanced down at me, leaning against the wall for support. My eyes were swollen from crying, my face red.
"I'm sorry, Miss Aubrey," he said, his blue eyes cold as he furrowed his brows. "It shouldn't have happened. I have a fiancée, and we were under the influence. It was a mistake, and I want us both to forget this ever happened."
My eyes locked on his as tears streamed down my face. "A mistake, you say?" I asked bitterly. He ran a hand through his messy black hair, looking stunned by my response.
My thoughts were racing, matching the rhythm of my tears.
"This is your compensation, Aubrey. It was a one-night stand, though you didn't consent..." he finally said, breaking the silence and forcing a check into my hand.
I widened my eyes in shock. Did he think I was a prostitute? A gold digger?
"I am no gold digger, Mr. Hunt, nor am I a slut," I spat, tearing the check to shreds.
"Suit yourself then, Miss Aubrey," he said coldly, his rage evident as he stormed out of Room 404-and out of my life.
He left me stranded on the cold marble floor of Room 404, unaware of the thing he left behind-my beginning of misery.
By Whitepheonix
"You have to serve the man in Room 404, Aubrey, and make sure you're proficient and adept," Mr. Brown's words echoed in my mind.
My hazel eyes shimmered as I gulped hard, reminiscing about the stern instructions my boss had given me earlier at the hotel. I stood nervously outside the door to Room 404.
I am Aubrey Smith-half Indian, half Mexican. I had just turned 19 last year and arrived in Country X to intern at Heaven. I was the youngest staff member: timid, reserved, and inexperienced.
"Mind you, Aubrey, there mustn't be any carelessness or clumsiness from you, or else you'll be laid off," Mr. Brown had yelled when I was selecting a bottle of wine from the rack. His fierce, icy brown-black eyes bored into me as his words drilled in the warning. His paunch loomed intimidatingly, amplifying my petrified state. I lowered my head, unable to do anything but whimper.
Mr. Brown is a direct, efficient, and tough man. As the manager of Sweet Heaven-a five-star hotel owned by our enigmatic boss-he strictly enforces the rules, and none of us dared to disobey.
"Yes... Yes, sir," I had whispered, barely audible. He glared at me one last time before walking away, leaving me trembling under the weight of his expectations.
Now, standing outside Room 404 with a bottle of wine in my hand, I felt like my fate hung by a thread. This one task could either solidify my hard-earned job or terminate it.
The man inside this room was clearly important to Mr. Brown. I didn't know how important until days ago, when our manager announced his arrival. Mr. Austin Hunt-a name that sent shivers through every staff member. He was a renowned business tycoon, one of the most influential elites in the world. The announcement had left the entire room silent as we absorbed the weight of his presence.
"Calm down, Aubrey. It's just a drink-it's not like it's your first time," I whispered to myself, trying to steady my nerves.
"But he's not just anybody," my inner voice taunted. "He's Mr. Hunt."
My hands trembled as I reached for the door handle. Anxious and on edge, I leaned against the door, listening for any sounds from inside. Nothing.
"You've got this, Aubrey. No mistakes," I muttered, inhaling and exhaling deeply. Summoning every ounce of courage, I knocked lightly, my voice barely above a whisper.
"Room service, sir."
"Come in," a cold, deep, hoarse voice replied from inside.
The tone sent a chill down my spine. My fragile confidence crumbled, leaving me nearly paralyzed. Tightening my grip on the wine bottle, I slowly pushed the door open and stepped inside.
The room was empty, though the faint sound of running water from the bathroom hinted at his presence. A subtle yet distinct scent of fresh peony cologne filled the air, likely his signature fragrance. I exhaled sharply, realizing I'd been holding my breath.
The room was extravagant, with spacious interiors, its own balcony, a private pool, and a gym. It was the most luxurious room in the hotel. As I moved to place the wine on the table, my gaze wandered to the trophies neatly displayed in a glass cabinet-symbols of his accomplishments.
"You're so lucky, Aubrey," I could almost hear my coworkers' voices teasing me. "You get to serve Mr. Hunt in place of Miss Isabella. A blessing in disguise."
Or was it just bad luck?
I frowned at the thought.
"He's so elegant-every woman's dream man," Rhea, my best friend, had said with dreamy eyes last week when we discussed his arrival. Rhea, with her vibrant green eyes and confident demeanor, was my opposite in many ways. We were both chambermaid and shared an apartment, but she was bold where I was reserved.
"How do you even know that, Rhea?" I had asked skeptically.
"I just know, Aubrey. He's perfect," she'd replied with confidence, brushing off my doubts.
"Well, I suggest you drop any unrealistic fantasies about him. It'll only end in heartbreak," I had advised her.
"I trust my heart, Aubrey. When it falls, it falls completely-unlike you, who'll probably stay a virgin for life," she'd teased, rolling her eyes playfully.
"Really?" I'd muttered, focusing on my chores.
Now, I filled a glass with Mr. Hunt's favorite wine, setting it carefully on the tray. Mr. Brown's icy voice replayed in my head, fueling my restlessness.
Suddenly, the bathroom door swung open, startling me. I lost my balance, the tray tilting dangerously. Bracing for the impact and pain, I shut my eyes tightly, expecting disaster.
But it never came.
Instead, I felt strong arms wrap around my waist, steadying me against a warm, bare chest. The sensation of skin against my hands made my eyes fly open in shock.
And there he was.
Mr. Austin Hunt.
Looking at his crystal clear gray eyes gave me goosebumps all over. I didn't waste a single minute getting free from his hold "am s..s..sorry Mr hunt. " his touch I could still feel around my waist. gulping hard I tried to calm myself ,my palms were sweaty.
I looked at my right hand which was on his bare chest a moment ago.
In a flash his face darkened and within minutes he was glowering down at me.
I felt my world end when he opened his mouth to talk but closes it shortly after.
My heart was beating promptly. I lowered my head as the fear welled up in my chest.
First encounter shouldn't be bad Aubrey ,you should leave a good impression of your self or you will be fired. My subconscious judged me when he moved close grabbed my chin to raise my face.
He briskly ran a hand on his dusty hair while staring down on me.
Please don't say it...don't.... I stiffened with his touch and clutched unto my self in a tight grip.
"are you the new chambermaid?" he asked. His expression and demean appearance apparently shot the last gleam of hope. I felt hard knots against my stomach and my voice constrict.
I raised my brows a little so I was looking into his cold grays and nodded a yes instead of speaking.
I was too scared and shivering to take notice of the empty glass,a 1000 dollar tips he dropped beside the glass. I was busy ruminating on the amount of carelessness I had displayed when I heard his roaring statement. "get out ! "
Running out of the room ,I stopped beside the elevator ,shaking and breathing heavily. it was a narrow escape ,have I ever being this lucky!?"
I have just escaped from Austin hunts the infamous billionaire with the highest IQ in both alternative and modern medicines,wine refinery, expect highest business share holders in new York ,underground lord and a dream of every woman.
But I was standing next to him,he touched me, though this was unusual and uncalled for however he didn't hurt me ,he could have done worst to me for tripping over but he didn't.
Why didn't he scream at me or request for my resignation immediately. I heard from rhea he had done same to most of his staffs that was slow and careless.
It was in the punch news right? Would he really request that from Mr brown? I saw that he was furious would he really do it ? the mare thought of it made me plummet downward.
I didn't know how long I was at this spot or how deep my thoughts was untill I felt a light tap behind my back.I gasped.
"how did it go Aubrey? Did you get fascinated by the most Charming man?have you fallen head over hills? Love at first sight " huh.
Rhea bumpered me with questions immediately. It took me a few seconds to talk as I was busy gasping for breath.
"you startled me rhea" I yelled almost immediately but she laughs it off by rolling her eyes.
"don't tell me you didn't get captivated by those crystal clear grays?" she flicked her fingers and said.
I held my head down so I don't initiate any of my tempers by saying something wrong. Rhea should have being there instead of me because rhea was my senior but for some reasons best known to Mr brown I was sent instead.
"don't tell me you didn't Aubrey with that look on your face"i heard rhea say with disappointment.
"you are hopeless rhea." I scowled and began walking to clean the other rooms while she tagged along.
Austin pov
It was in the evening ,I heard just retired from my resort trip and taking a bath when I heard a fierce knock at my door.
Following after a timid voice "room service."
I brushed the bubbles from my face and grabbed a towel. "come in." I plainly said,wiping any remaining moisture from my hair.
without another word,I heard the door click and afterwards a thudding noise.
"i ruffled my messy dark her and wrapped a neat white towel around my body. the day had being so hectic with annoying adventures and all I just wanted to do at this moment is to take a sip from my favorite wine.
The moment I came into the room and saw her I felt my heart beat so strong that I felt it was going to burst out of my chest.
My eyes got stuck and my body froze . slowly my eyes lifted to her rose plump lips trembling with fear,my guts flayed because I had caught her by surprise making her lose her balance . while she closed her eyes waiting for the hit and I had reacted faster caging her fragile body against my bare dripping wet body .
Instantly my gaze met hers ,she was blinking, battling with indecision and I felt instant captivation of her hazel innocent eyes.
"i..am..sorry" she stuttered making me frown ,I hated this word. I was about to ask her what was your mistake?" when she freed herself from my hold. This made me glower groaning fiercely, no woman or lady had ever done this,trying to stir a distance.
I maintained a cold and aloof expression while scrutinizing her plump lips which is shivering and her glowing white skin,shiny black hair and
curvy , model like body. I ran a hand across my hair. "are you the new hotel attendant?" I asked.
She nodded instead of speaking. I opened my mouth to contradict but closes it again,the sudden attraction was too fierce and I hated it. No. 1 rule of a mafia boss was to stay away from romance and from the way my heart stirred when I saw her I knew she was special and could be my end .