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168 Hours In Hell

168 Hours In Hell

Author: : Zed
Genre: Short stories
Eloise Muir is a young, energetic woman. She has everything in her which makes any man kneel to her. Working in a News Firm, she had encountered many admirers and turned down their proposals elegantly. But, her one co-worker, David Cooper was reluctant to accept her refusal, hence, he kept finding every way to please her and help her in anything she wanted no matter how cold or indifferent she would act to him. After Eloise's trip to Germany, she was supposed to return alone but she returned with an unexpected boyfriend who soon turned into her loving husband. After the delightful rollercoaster of events in Eloise's life, she returned to her work as a Married Woman looking more sexy, confident, and beautiful, but she didn't know that there was someone waiting eagerly for her return. On her first day at her job as a Married Woman, Eloise and the seven members of her staff got kidnapped by none other than David. He felt betrayed by Eloise and was eager to punish her, to make her realize that no one except him could give him the best pleasure of her life. Seven Days, Seven Hostages. One Hundred and Sixty-Eight Hours, Will Eloise be able to survive in those terrible hours and days of her life? Will she be able to resist the temptation of David and betray her husband? Will she be able to make wise decisions that would save her and her colleagues' lives, or would she be drowned in David's lustful games?

Chapter 1 Ch

ELOISE POV:

"Come on, one dance." The people around us cheered asking for another dance. I looked at my handsome husband. He was wearing an open-neck silk shirt, tailored slacks, and a well-cut jacket.

My handsome man gave me his beautiful charming smile, stretching his hand towards me and then bowing in respect as I took his hand, and again we were in the center of the stage dancing.

"They just can't get enough..." My husband chuckled, and I let out a small giggle while looking at the bunch of people we had invited for dinner before I would start my work again as a married woman.

I had been working in a news firm, writing different articles and covering breaking news. That's what I do. I went to Germany for an interview with a high-end man, where I met Theo. Theo worked for a well-known software engineering company. He is an engineer, a well-built, educated, intelligent man.

I was not someone easy to please but he had swept me over with his charms. In just two months, he proposed and the other week we were planning the wedding and got married the same week.

And then we went off to Paris for our dreamy honeymoon. Just now, I have returned to Manchester where I belonged and my work too. Thankfully, Theo is also soon joining me back here. I can't stand long-distance relationships at all.

"It's a long song, Eloise." My husband murmured in my ears, taking away the memories of all the blissful times I had been counting just now.

I looked at him apologetically thinking he had been getting bored by my colleagues' unreasonable demands but when I looked into his eyes, I saw something intense and dark.

He reached down to my bottom, squeezing my hips gently and then he pushed his erection between my legs rubbing on the thin fabric of my dress.

I bit my lips suppressing a moan, Theo is a man, who could f**k me for twenty-four hours a day and I love the passion he has for me, he made me so horny yet desirable. I just can't resist this man. I adored his beauty, his looks, and his boner which is currently rubbing between my thighs and touching my crotch from time to time.

I looked at my colleague with hesitation. What he is doing is too outrageous. I needed to remind him that we are in public.

"We are in public, Theo," I whispered in his ear and he gave me a seductive grin, making my panties wet in an instant.

"I've paid the DJ fair money, can't you see the lights are too dim, no one would be able to see what we are doing." He whispers in my ear, his hand slowly trailing up and down my back.

I pulled away looking into his eyes which showed excitement and lust, mine too shining with the same excitement, I bit my lips and then leaned over him, "I've never done it in public."

"Neither had I." He gave me a huge smile and then his hand started to go down to my plunge neckline, pulling the cloth aside to reveal my one ni**le, and then he started to rub his finger on it, arousing me.

"They are so hard." He said in awe and I tried to stifle my moan.

"This would be fun." He whispered again leaning on me, his tongue indecently brushing my ear and I flinched from the sensation.

In a minute, he hiked up my skirt and then with a strong pull tore my silk sheer panties in an instant. "Ahh." A surprised cry escaped my lips.

He put my panties in his pocket after sniffing them, my pu**y throbbed at his gesture, he loved to smell my arousal it turned him on.

He then pulled me to the corner near a pillar. I tried to look around to see if anyone was looking but it was too dark. Everyone is immersed in dancing or God knows if they decided to do the same thing me and my husband were doing.

Once he cornered me to the pillar, he pulled down both sides of my dress revealing my br**asts, he leaned down and circled my ni**Les with his tongue, "Ahh..." A moan escaped my lips and he quickly covered my mouth while his mouth remained on my ni**les assaulting my both br**sts again and again.

His kisses started to get on my chest and then my shoulder while my hands started to get inside his hair tugging at them forcefully.

In a swift move, he held me up and his c**k rubbed at my warm entrance making me push myself desperately into him.

"Patience, Darling." He teased me, "We have nine minutes left." He whispered in my ear.

"Theo..." I moaned his name when he circled my entrance with his hard c**k. I am dying for him to push his hardcore inside me.

"Please..." I started to beg.

"Please... What..." He teased me more.

"I want you inside me... F**k me, baby... Please." I beg him and even though it's too dark, I know he is smirking the way I am writhing in his hold for his c**k.

"Oh, I will, my dear wife." Saying that, he pushed his hard length inside me and I felt like a tunnel just got inside me, "God..." I gasp at his rough thrust.

He was so deeply hitting my womb and knowing that people around could catch us at any moment, it felt more good and exciting.

"F**k, so wet..." He whispered while thrusting harder into me, sandwiching me between him and the hard pillar. I am sure my back is going to be bruised now, but it's all worth it.

"Theo... Harder... Baby... Harder..." I moaned while scissoring my legs around his waist.

"Yes... Darling, yes..." He stole light kisses from my face and then sealed my lips, pushing his tongue into my mouth and our tongues started to move aggressively, he intended to explore me and so was I.

"Three minutes." He pulled away, breathing heavily.

Holding my waist in a crushing grip he started to thrust more harder, more firmly, hitting my G-spot. "Close..." I exhaled as he shook me violently.

"Give it to me, baby." He bit my ear and that's it I explode like hot lava, covering his hard c**k with my cum.

"F**k..." With three hard thrusts, he pounded his ejaculate into me, filling me fully.

His breath lingers on my face, panting heavily and then smoothly he put me back on my legs, I held his arms tightly to stable my wobbling legs, looking around I realized that the lights are starting to get bright and then hurriedly I started to smooth my dress, putting my hanging breasts back into their place and then pushing down my skirt, smoothing my hands over it to keep it still.

When I looked up Theo had been dressed, his hair smooth not the f**king mess I made before and his face as calm as water, sometimes I felt envious of how good he is at composing his emotions.

His hand reached to my face wiping away the sweat on my face even setting my smudged makeup which I noticed later on his handkerchief.

"Yeah..."

Everyone started to cheer when the lights got normal and the sound ended.

Theo stole a quick peck on my lips and that's how we ended the dinner. From tomorrow, my daily routine life is going to start. I am happy yet a bit perplexed by the thought that Theo is going to leave for Germany this morning and hopefully after a week, he will be here with me forever.

Chapter 2 TWO

"Hmm..." I moaned in my sleep, something wet and warm circles my c**t, and I am thrown over the edge, I don't know if it was a dream of mine or reality.

"Ahhh..." I moan louder when I feel soft strokes penetrating me and I squirm from the sensation.

BLINK

I opened my eyes, bewildered, and when I look down I found my dear husband eating my pu**y, such a lavish sight for my eyes.

I sat up, detaching him from my hot entrance and he groaned unhappily.

"Come back." He demanded grumpily, sitting up when I suddenly push him down on the bed and sit on his face rubbing my wet c**t on his mouth, "Now, it's better."

He smirk, sucking on my c**t, while I rubbed my hips in sync with his face, God, How am I going to stay without him for a whole week, those thoughts gave a pang of sadness in my heart, ruining my intense orgasm.

****

"I'll be in touch." Theo kissed my forehead before leaving and I tried not to cry in front of him. "I am going to miss you," I tell him in a low voice trying my best to not lose my posture.

He took a cab and disappeared from my sight while I walked back to our house feeling low and sad. I look at the clock, it showed 6 in the morning, in an hour I have to show up at the News Firm.

Quickly, I took shower and then got into my clothes. I wore a black lace bra, with black thongs and stockings, over it I wore a purple high neck dress that stops at my knees and black kitten heels that match the outfit overall.

Grabbing my coat, I walked out hurriedly, get in my car, and drove away.

Because I hurried to the News Firm, I even forgot about the sadness and loneliness in my heart for Theo.

I reached the News Firm, in fifteen minutes only and then parked my car at my usual spot.

I closed my eyes taking a few deep breaths and then finally with confidence I got out of my car and started to walk inside the News Firm.

"Morning, Ms. Muir..." The guard greeted me at the door and I instantly corrected him, "Mrs..."

"Oh... Yes..." He looked at me, flushed with embarrassment, "Congratulations BTW." He congratulated me warmly and smiled shyly as I made my way inside.

On my way to my office, I met a few more colleagues greeting me and finally I am inside my office as Mrs. Eloise Theo. It felt so good to be married, I looked down at the shiny ring on my finger which reminds me of my lovely husband.

I quickly sent him a text, telling him I reached the firm and missing him terribly already.

I sat in my chair and then started my work. I have been away for a while so I needed to do all the re-checking of my work. I have been writing a few articles, I must type them first and then take them to my Manager if he would approve them to get released in time.

"Congratulations on married life, Loise..." A warm cup of coffee was placed at my desk when I was indulging in typing my articles, I looked up from my laptop and found the gray predatory gaze of David, one of my colleagues, he is all about software and computers which I am not really keen of but with Theo, it felt different. I don't know why.

"It's Mrs. Theo, and thanks BTW," I replied with a curt nod and a small calculated smile.

David had been one of my admirers here in the firm since the day I joined the News Firm, he had been a polite, friendly, caring man but then soon he started to get too close with me asking for the dinners, lunch, and breakfast. I tried to refuse him many times but he stayed persistent.

At last, one day I accepted his invitation and then the worst thing happened. On our first dinner, which wasn't even a date, he proposed to me out of the blue, and obviously refused him immediately.

I tried to be as polite as I could, not wanting to hurt his feelings, he looked heartbroken by my "NO" but what could I do, I am just not into him.

David has curly golden hair and gray eyes, his face square shape, his figure normal, around 5.5 ft, I guess. He is an average-looking man and I never feel attracted to him never.

"You're very welcome, Mrs. Theo... I hope you're enjoying your first day at work after marriage." He said with a smile that didn't match his eyes, he looked creepy.

"That I am, David." I told him firmly with a face that would shout "Get the F**k out of my office." And thankfully he did.

"I'll see you around, then."

"Hmm..." I tried to not scoff and finally, he left my office leaving me alone in peace.

BOOM

I had thought that he would create any ruckus in the office and will try to bully me or argue with me, after all, he is the one most affected by my marriage, he didn't even attend my marriage, neither he was present at the dinner I and Theo had hosted yesterday night for all my colleagues.

Not that it mattered to me, but it's a bit strange. The man who would never leave me alone suddenly had cut off his ties, Strange, no?

Well, Shaking my head I tried to not waste my whole day pondering David's changed behavior. Instead, I took out my phone and started texting Theo, he had taken a train from Amsterdam to Germany.

He is on his way, and soon he will be here with me, in our home.

I smile at the thought.

The day was hectic, and during lunch hour something memorable happened.

"Here to our newlywed hardworking employee... Mrs. Eloise Theo Muir." My Manager called out my name with respect and then handed me a huge flower bouquet, a chocolate pack, and a beautiful expensive perfume bottle as a gift.

"Oh... Thank you so much." I thank him with gratitude.

"Oh, you deserve it, Eloise..." He said with a warm smile, "So, three cheers for the lady in purple... Eloise..." He yelled excitedly and everyone started to cheer up.

"Hip Hip Hurray..."

I laughed, overwhelmed by everyone's love, they didn't cheer me that much excitedly at my first successful article, their energy is surprising.

The day went too smoothly beyond my imagination and here came the time for me to leave, before packing up I received the message from Theo, that he has reached Germany safely.

I sighed in relief and then took my necessary stuff. I put them in my laptop bag and then walked out of my office. Today the office is usually quiet. There had been a Unity March event for which most of the people had gone.

"Zzzzz .... Zzzzz ...."

"George..." As I took a few steps toward the door, I saw George sitting on his mother's chair playing with his paper plane. "Aunt Eloise..." He beamed as soon as he saw me.

"What are you doing here, huh?" I messed up his long brown silky hair and his smile widened.

"Mommy is going to take me to McDonald's... I am waiting for her to finish her work."

"Hmm... so today's the burger day..." I teased him.

Lily, one of my colleagues, is a single parent and every week she would select one cheat day where she and her son would have picked something from outside to eat. George loved cheat days and Lily too looked happy when she saw his excitement and delights.

"Hey, Eloise... I was just supposed to leave these few papers I needed to print on time." Lily walked back explaining the reason why she left George at her place.

"Oh, it's completely fine, Lily. Take your time." I waved my hand at her and then took out some chocolates from the box giving them to George.

"Here, have some."

"Thank you, Aunt, you're the best in here." He hugged me happily and I smiled at his compliment.

"We should be going, now," Lily said lightly and I too nodded my head walking along beside them when suddenly we heard gunshots.

BANG ... BANG ... BANG ...

Before we knew what was happening, a man in a mask came over and sprayed something which made us all unconscious in an instant.

The things from my hand slipped making a loud Thud noise and then it went all black in front of my eyes.

BOOM

Chapter 3 THREE

I heard rustling sounds, keys fidgeting, wailing, crying...

With difficulty, I opened my eyes. I am in a room with a few people whom I do not know well but they all work in the News Firm, I have seen them there.

My head hurt, I held my head and groaned from the pain, it felt like someone had hit me hard.

"Arghh..."

"Mommy... Mommy..." I heard a cry, a familiar voice, instantly I looked up and saw George, his face covered with fear and anxiousness. I approached him staggeringly and then blinked my eyes multiple times. Finally, I saw Lily lying on the floor unconscious and Geroge shaking her looking worried.

"Lilly... Lily..." I patted Lily's cheek trying to wake her up. She didn't move, I tried to look for her pulse and thankfully, I found it, but she is too weak.

"W..a..t..e..r..." She murmured and I looked around eagerly, "Water... Does anyone have water? Water... Please?"

I yelled but everyone seemed to turn a deaf ear as no one responded to me, just looking at me with tight lips. Are they all ghosts or have they been drugged? I couldn't figure it out at the moment.

"What happened to Mommy? Aunt Eloise, what happened?" George looked at me with frightened eyes and I held him closer to me.

"Everything is going to be alright, George... Don't worry..." I rubbed George's back to soothe his fear and he squirmed in my hold. Poor boy.

I looked around the room, there were 3 young men, 2 older, and 1 woman who is a sweeper at the News Firm.

I could see the fear on their faces and their blank glances were proof that they too have no idea what happened to us and why we are here caged in a room together.

Fear prickled my skin, have we all taken as hostages?

****

TICK TOCK

An hour passed by, I guess and Lily stayed unconscious. She kept mumbling for water every now and then, feeling impatient. I stood up and started hammering on the door.

"Open the door... Open the door... Someone here would die, she needs water... Open the door...

Who are you?

What will you get from keeping us here?

Show yourself...

Open the damn door..."

I kicked the door furiously, there was no response from the other side nor did anyone make any effort to join me, I was all alone hyper and hammering at the door with all my myths.

CLICK ... CLICK ...

I heard the footsteps of someone approaching and took a step back cautiously when I heard the keys jingling and then the door opened wide revealing a man's silhouette, he was wearing black clothes, and his face was fully covered with a black mask.

His eyes are deep black which can be seen by the mask. His lips were wide and thick, which could be seen from the mask too clearly.

He looked straight at me, waiting for me to speak, "I... This... This woman... Lily... She needs water..." I stutter from fear, his appearance was frightening, and his aura carried a vast sense of terror around him, darkness followed along.

He took a step forward and I sucked in a breath of nervousness.

One step

Second

Third

BOOM

My heart seemed to drop at its lowest when he just got inches away from me and then suddenly he turned walking towards Lily who was lying unconsciously, he studied her with his eyes, and then again his gaze was on me.

"Come with me." He spoke for the first time, his voice robotic.

He made a gesture from his hand for me to follow and gulping nervously I started to follow him slowly glancing at George one last time, who was petrified by the situation.

He locked the door with a key and then walked into a narrow path and I followed quietly, each second was increasing the terror in my heart, at any moment, I could faint, and my legs too started to wobble.

We completed the narrow path and then four doors came into my view. One at the left, one at the right, one at the center, and one at the right corner. It was small and hidden in the dark but somehow I noticed it.

He opened the center door and then let me in. I entered the room and gasped in shock. It has a large TV screen showing the inside of the room where we all are caged at the moment.

Which means, he had installed a camera there.

I gulped nervously, sweat started to cover my back, this man is truly dangerous but who is he, and what the hell he wanted from us all?

"Please... Let us go... You won't get anything by keeping us here... Please..."

I pleaded with him, and he stayed unmoved. Taking a step closer, he pushed me to the wall and then whispered in a rich dark voice, "I will get what I want."

I looked into his dark eyes, with my face drained out of blood, what did his words mean? I am hell terrified now from his closeness.

He then stepped away and picked up a water bottle, "This is what you want, huh?" He inquired and I nodded my head eagerly.

"Huh..." He scoffed at my eagerness. "Not that easy."

"Please... That woman would die without water, she has a son..." I told him reasonably but he looked untouched by my words.

"We will play a game." He said suddenly, making me stunned.

"A game?" I raised my brow in questioning. I don't feel any right vibes from this man at all.

"I'll touch you for two minutes, and you have to keep a smile on your face. If the smile fades, the water too fades away..." He laughed like a maniac and I gulped down with difficulty.

Touch... What kind of touch is he talking about? The panic started to cover my heart but then Lily and George... George is waiting for me. I looked at the TV Screen and saw the pitiful state of mother and son. My heart tightened and taking a deep breath, I finally made up my mind.

"Ok," I responded firmly and his lips curved into a vicious smile making me unsure if I had taken the right decision by agreeing to his demand.

BOOM

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